june 23 2008

BAND OF THE DAY: THE BEDOUIN JACKS

well as i promised, i am adding to this blog (yet i still am unconvinced that this is being read)

i know many blogs depict world travels in such a magical, poetic way, while these words have no "inner meaning"
while this blog is poorly constructed (i.e. poor word choice with poetic meaning) i do write in my free time, mostly poetry, and i will publish some of my stuff in this blog..... its not great but i like to write in my free time so enjoy!

this is an autobiographical piece

“Heaven is what i can not reach”
but does it exist? retreating every time when towards it i take a step
how many steps have been taken? from the sunrise on my birthday to
when i was 3
to
when i was 7
and back to when I was 12
throughout all of my sushi eating days
i have been taking more steps, hunting, but to find? or to have faith is the question
but now i know that He is alive and far, coming, and here now.
by now the sun has centered the ceiling.
but me to busy writing some poems to notice
the beautiful, quiet, quick
moon rise


comment if you would like to know reasons for specific punctuation and word choice and paragraph breaks or something......also critisism is welcomed (it would convince me that someone is actually reading this) i would love to hear from someone!

the quote that i lead off with was by emily dickenson

i will publish more poems in the days to come!

bye for now